You have never shined so bright

A transition phase for someone I know

You have never shined so bright,
like the silver moon of May
Offering your perennial radiance to the stars.

I could feel your warmth
through fragrant words and smile
Of loving embrace.

You have never been so opulent
filling the air with calmness
like a distant creek over a field.

I fill myself with wonder and pride
under your shadow,I trace spirituality
With your disparaged wisdom
I grow in in feasible years.

I have walked through seasons
To taste your perennial divinity
Entrap me in your holy ardor
and bring my distraught ed heart to ease.

Reviews

[Aehr]

I don't know what to say. Awesome poem :)

[gombeggar]

nicely done, but overdone...tone down the flowery words and say it to yerself plainly and see how it looks 2 u

[Loner]

Great depth of feelings and expressions i must say
a great emotional punch....

[Dayran]

The ways there are of anything possible is many. The way we get to it is the work of love's mystery. Going all the way back to start all over may be one way to understand its mystery. A write that is hopeful and remains that way.

[Felicity's Eve]

Very well written and your words flow perfectly! Love the transitional theme and how well you portrayed that through metaphors :)

100/100

[Salar Majak]

it is fascinating how we some times get inspired by people's lives, this is by far the best poem to make someone feel better i've ever read, beautifully written,
incredible ink

[Wildwood Fox]

I love this! Well done :)