A Prayer To Greater Heavens

Nothing much here...just a prayer

Close your celestial eyes

Take a deep breath, my angel

Sleep tonight, the war begins tomorrow.

Sleep so that you can face tussles

And I will stay awake to pray for you

My spiritual wealth will blend us in elated sunlight. 

I, who has been writing to skies

to daffodils and rainbows

Shall pray for the gods themselves

for tasting their light among orions.

To be relished by the warmth of the dawn

blessing the inner solitude  

I would embrace the unearthly attire

for a greater cause,that's beyond my self.

I will tend to greater heavens

to see my gods, blessed by earthly wallows

to see them shine for eternity.

Close your eyes my Angel

I would stay awake all night

and pray for your starry eminence

Author's Note

Something that I finished in a few minutes....Would like to know how the Title sounds

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

The title works just fine :) It doesn't look like you worked on it in a short time. It's not choppy in any way. Many girls wish to have someone say all this to them. Everyone needs someone to lean on. We all want a selfless soul whose sole purpose of existence is to be there for us, and not have any problems of their own. But when we're all wishing for that one thing, no one's left for just giving. Great write :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

such a great review...thank you :)

[Blue Ivory]

You're welcome

[Don Shaw]

great work

[Renée]

You say " nothing much just a prayer" though you and I are of different faiths..for me a prayer is the precious of all expressions! Certainly it must be for you also!

This is a beautiful prayer to your faith and it seems for your love as well

[Dayran]

Carries a tune that's angelic.

[Felicity's Eve]

The title is fantastic and the poem itself is simply phenomenal! Amazing wording and detail and flow and the theme really struck home for me. :)

A well-deserved 100/100 :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

oh Nora...great to see you here :) thanks for the review....my visits to this site are very limited these days....will be back soon to review your stuff

[Felicity's Eve]

:)