My Fulgent days

I followed clouds over opulent heights
tides over the blue vaults
walking barefooted over grass fields
feet blended with mud streams.

Trying to float in narrow creeks
in birthplaces of my evolution
stained with fiery passions
joyous desires burning beneath.

I feel the iridescent blessings of my gods
for eternity of transcendental spirit,
Smooth like the skin of the earth
Red as the evening winds.

I have lingered,soaked like a uncertain flower
Wet with the fruition of night sky
Mornings filled with enchanted silver
Blazing afternoons of golden graces.

Life met me in such a delusion
under scruple rains and lightning youth
where reverie met the reality
that stripped the other side of beauty.

Reviews

[patricia]

I would love to take all your poems and compile them all together into one story, it would make fascinating reading.
The first stanza wets the sensual appetites pleasantly.
Second stanza turns one inwards to a searching contemplation.
Third stanza begins as witness but produces two beautiful descriptive ending lines.
Fourth stanza leaves me lost for words, just enjoying the gorgeous work.


Last stanza returns us to reality and shows the rocky road to the final summit.

As always...Superb.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

What a great review Trish.....couldn't have got a better review than this...thank you so much

[Clive D Costa]

Bring strength to reality! Illusion dellusion i love those words. Like i love this poem

[InsanityWriter]

The imagery is perfection! Absolutely beautiful... :)

[Marie]

This is lovely. Your poem contains such imagry...and then reality strips it of beauty...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you mam for stopping by and reviewing this.. :)

[Robert James Parfett]

Another masterclass of description and imagery. Again I would say that we are so different in both what we write about and subject matter, but I do enjoy your work.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx man! Such a confidence booster for me :)

[Dayran]

What's good for one man is good for all and what's good for all is good for one man. It is an experience of opposites in the times experienced by the man but the outcome is the same. A nice poem that glides over possibilities.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanks for the review Dayran.. :)

[gombeggar]

cap ALL title words...how many times i gotta say this?

good ideas, very good words...but needs some work

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha....sorrrrrry...i jus forget every time

[chaotic katie]

Lovely flow and imagery. Beautifully written!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Imagery here was the key...I could sense, feel, taste and hear the words as you wrote them, which is always a good thing. I like the expanse of your words...they feel big and bold to me. Well done.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you so much

[quinfinn]

some very interesting choices of adjectives in this write. very descriptive and image filled. all in all a very clever and lovely write.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you quinn.... my comeback write in a way..was taking Clg tests from about a week