Can the enthralling past be our future?

Will those days knock at the door again?

When sun was the Air I breathed

and we were two strangers

staring each other like curious artists.

We had a shared innocence,

a coherent spirit that spoke to our heart

in a loneliness that we never tasted

We found mutuality in our poems.

In muse less terrain we lived before

scratching walls of our solitude

running hands through the sand

to prove our artistic blending.

Will those seasons come all over again?

Where I peeped into the gardens

of unknown escalations

This was the time I tasted June delights

It was time to choose a path of existence 

on the Earth,to find the beautiful generosity

That had a name,had a smile

echoing the love of all that love has ever been.

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

What a lovely time you're describing! I'm sure just about anyone would miss it if they'd had something like this once upon their lives...Beautiful piece!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very nicely expressed, you decpict the meaningful essence of this particular relationship and the substansive nature of your bond very powerfully

[Robert James Parfett]

I often fin myself trying to relive the past, but I think we need to just remember it fondly and the future will take care of itself. I like the feel of this. Well done.

[Akshita]

Really a nice 1....

[patricia]

The fourth stanza in this piece is the best for me. Enjoyed.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I LIKE this...Some terrific lines and an honest message...We can relive our past simply by thinking.....

[Dayran]

Such days do come and go all the time, but our mutual companions are today like demon horses who have forgotten the original purpose of what we are.

[quinfinn]

we may never pass this way again but we will keep our memories forever. awesome write!

[gombeggar]

all CAPS in the title...i like this poem very much cuz it lacks unity on so many levels...but as an editor isee so many problems with it...needs a lot of work

[Devanshu Rajput]

a greatly done nice piece