Sonnet 7

Where doth thou keepst thy heart?

Amongst voids lying in our fluey  way

Betwixt castles whence our love thwart

in sunburnt dearth of spring heyday.

To all thy beauty that doth bliss me,

And to thy hued charms bids my heart

Where in my spirit lives an image of thee

My thoughts of love thou canst share a part.

But heart mine dost embrace thee

Even though thy love, methinks wary

Thy thoughts but canst flee from me

thole I shalt,a heartbeat bleary.

 Prithee to emboss me in thy bridewell

 Durst to give thy heart,I wilt blend in hues and pastel.

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Amazing poetry! You're very good with sweet words!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think that you have used this classical language very effectively,' practice makes perfect' as they say and you seem to be doing plenty of that!

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

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[patricia]

Although I admire Shakespeare greatly, I find it too much hard work to sift. I am sorry to say the same happened to me here. I can see it will have appeal to those of that bent and I already know how good your work can be. Best I can do on this I'm afraid.

[Mike Emil]

prickest me do i not beat you with a 2x4?
mess with my rum do i not get pissed?
so many questions

[Manpreet]

Vow! Beautifully presented piece!!

[Miss Alicia]

Not having much knowledge in Shakespearean writing, it's a bit hard for me to understand, but it sounds lovely

[gombeggar]

well done, senor shakespeare...missed a spacing on the last line...but very well done homage

[quinfinn]

billy shakes (william shakespeare) would be proud, nicely done.

[Devanshu Rajput]

a graceful sonnet....don't know much about this style....