We are flower aura of our heaven

I devour semblance with my lighted heart

from the songs of a pure girl

I live in the reverie of her honeyed elegance

I am the new moon of her eternal spring.

There is a life in the perception of my words

I embrace maturity, the self-compliance

tasting the rainbows of her kindness,

the hues of her resilient beauty.

 

I absorb her radiance with restraint

As an atom in the center of a vibrant star

Ethereal is the fragrance of our hearts

that brings us harmony in yellow weather.

 

We are flower aura of our heaven

We live in our own paradise of art

Our souls meet in the castles of september breeze

I love the tenacity that still survives in her eyes

Like an infinite verse of my poetry.

The rays of her soul

shine into my troubled spirit

and her purity gets transformed into me

With cryptic crayons of that transparency

traced by the god himself,with tranquility.

Reviews

[Simbake777]

A wonderfully fluid work! Well worth a read! :)

Keep up the good work!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you :) and its just so great to see you here...been a long time

[Simbake777]

You're very welcome! :) And yes, rather too long! :( I was on hiatus, while my chronically-ill husband battled some health issues. Nothing too serious, but he was uncomfortable, for the longest time! D: Hopefully, his renewed good fortune will continue...

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful imagery. :D Great work!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx dear writer :)

[Akshita]

NICE FLUENCY......A REALISTIC ONE!!!!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you Akshita :)

[Miss Alicia]

This is wonderful

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx alicia :)

[Mike Emil]

sounds like when i go to the chinese buffet
now that's paradise, people!!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you so much :)

[Manpreet]

The rays of her soul
shine into my troubled spirit
and her purity gets transformed into me
With cryptic crayons of that transparency
traced by the god himself,with tranquility.

well penned piece with beautiful details and expressions!

[Angeldust-magic]

I really like the last 5 lines, very well written :)

[Dayran]

A freely flowing verse that seems to go in and out of windows at random and seeks that eternal relation to each other. Nicely done.

[gombeggar]

all caps in yer title...'cryptic crayons'? nice touch

[beautiful dreamer]

beautiful as always :)