Let me rise from the deads

I am lost in a reverie

I cannot see her truth, she will not see mine

And the weak heart in me freezes

But I rejoice in spring winds

Over blue clouds I run

hoping to steal some joy for my heart

to fill some provocation into it.

 

Seasons haunts and I am stuck in revelations

Ready to loose myself of useless configurations

I am not a subject of importance

For long , I have't smiled from the heart.

 

I have become a poem that every broken heart cherishes

My verses shred me inside my terrible aloneness

My roots of spiritual prudence endure.

I explored the mighty death and finally

Knew the meaning of life

I return to the living,with an eternal hope.

 

Reviews

[G!o]

Three words; meticulous, beautiful and gripping. Love this...felt like it's a part of me speaking.

[InsanityWriter]

Wow. :)

[Dayran]

A great journey. An even greater accomplishment.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

hope indeed and atleast his has the language skills, plus a moaning, sulky, hapless voice and body language to compliment his emotional turmoil, well penned

[beautiful dreamer]

oh wow. great poem!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good imigary. Nice

[Mike Emil]

i've explored death and i've lost myself in my writing too

now i look to the likes of gary busey for inspiration and booze

[Manpreet]

I have started enjoying the remarkable change in your poems now like" have become a poem that every broken heart cherishes
My verses shred me inside my terrible aloneness
My roots of spiritual prudence endure.

have meaning and the meaning is deep, touching and calm. Beautifully expressed piece!!

[Salar Majak]

Over blue clouds I run
hoping to steal some joy for my heart
to fill some provocation into it.



amazing! and the title is amazing! and the free style is beautiful!, i can never get enough of these poems!

I have become a poem that every broken heart cherishes
My verses shred me inside my terrible aloneness
My roots of spiritual prudence endure.

you make me drunk with poetry, thanks foe that

[Blue Ivory]

I find, I can relate to a lot of your poetry. Thank you so much for sharing them with me!