The dazzle of the falling cosmos

You live in actuality now 

I am still stuck in the illusion of adulation

Love redefines itself from time to time.

You have found the precision of life

from the tales of my misery,

stories of my grief renovated

Life is just a delusion of biology 

Love is not more than a sophisticated sense

of faith and treasure.

I know you were not sentient

Even as and when I loved you

I languished for the coherence of our souls.

In this life to die, is nothing new

And in reality, to live is not eternity

It may be not sturdy to rejuvenate love again.             

So I write to earn some pulses

My poetry is the flare of falling cosmos

burning with the last chunk of its fuel.

Reviews

[patricia]

The only thing that makes me sad about this poem is the idea of searching for a god to worship in what is only human. As if one is studying a fallen star not noticing the endless universal sky.

[Alexa Tasch]

The title drew me and and the poem was stunning. Beautiful as always

[Baby Ricochet]

Honestly dude. I don't like your poetry, I don't like that you don't review anyone's work or that you don't even have the courtesy to thank people that review yours. The only a*****e who can get away with that kind of arrogant bullshit on the WC is David Lewis Paget because he's a brilliant writer, something you're not. Stop sending me RR'S bro. They're f*****g annoying.

[quinfinn]

ricochet, i think you just jumped up about twenty clicks on my "this guy is really cool" meter!

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm getting tired of this kind of crap on here

[Balkaran Sidhu]

like i said...I don't review people's work bcoz i m not able to find enough tym....i am an engineering student..a cricketer too...only time I use writerscafe is in the evening...I write in the time that I have and then post it...I read fellow writers work on weekends or when I am free from college..but during past few weekends..i have been busy in performing in cultural festivals of various colleges as a part of street play team of my college..so i have been really busy...it was only matter of time before I could have started reviewing others' work...nd i ll be doin that ..this coming week
thanks for the review nd for being patient for so long...

[InsanityWriter]

"So I write to earn some pulses
My poetry is the flare of falling cosmos"

Stupendous. ;)

[Dayran]

A strange melancholy.

[Angeldust-magic]

I love your word play in this ;)

[beautiful dreamer]

nice!

[Manpreet]

I enjoyed the new definitions of love, life and poetry. " Flare of falling cosmos" Wow I loved it.

[Blue Ivory]

I agree with what you are saying here, about love and life. And your poem slightly reminds me of Cosmic Love by Florence And The Machine. You have a lot of depth and pure talent.

[gombeggar]

capitalize yer titles

'So I write to earn some pulses' ...didja mean 'pluses'?

a well done albeit sad rumination of thought