Achromatizing Unaffable metaphors

You never knew how my thoughts for you,

were born,under truth of the sun

how they captured you in symbolized honor, 

articulating grace of an Arcadian muse.

You never heard my words, 

never tried to fathom the waves of my rhymes

That would have echoed your majesty,

and praised your perpetual virtues.

You never felt touch of my verses, 

like rain drops from the heaven

Those were clues of my naivete

seeking a touch to the thousand hues of your aura.

Maybe you never felt that you were the first,

still invaluable to the heart who chases you for eternity, 

You, who no longer know that I exist, 

I write so that you will apprehend me,

I don't yet know how I become a bard.

The tears of solicitations lives in my tenderness, 

Every poem I write is like the reconciliation of me with you

Though you wouldn't taste it,would never embrace

the endless ornaments of my words

Yet I put them up to keep breathing 

Reviews

[patricia]

you have a great way of being able to take the chemistry that pervades those sort of atmospheres where love longs for recognition. There is a touch of magic in the way you almost leave the reader feeling they know the answers. The last line with its reason and purpose was the most touching of all.

[Kaushik Mitra]

seems as if i was ferreting for this poem...truly a fervid poem...

[InsanityWriter]

Last stanza: perfection. Well done. (;

[Manpreet]

vow!!! Lovely poem, delicate and deep. It has lot of feel to it and I love poems with a the feel!!! all in all great write!

[Dayran]

Wonderfully evocative. May it last forever.

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

Positively brilliant :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks :)

[Inda]

Very touching piece, full of sadness. Great job!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks INDA :)

[Marie]

She's missed a great deal, not hearing you, not seeing you, not reading your verse...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nice to see you here mam :)

[gombeggar]

like rain drops from the heaven ...'heavens'

still invaluable to the heart who chases you for eternity, ...'chased'

very well done piece of poetry here...my edits are just cuz i can't help mahself...butyer overall work is very well done

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Its always a pleasure to hear from you....love the little mistakes u point out...hope it improves my writing :)

[gombeggar]

we all make mistakes...i've just been afflicted with the disease of editorial-itis...comes in handy but makes me sound like a b*****d...cuz i mean it when i say yer work is very well done a a bit of writ...keep up the good work

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha...thanks :)

[Blue Lotus]

such is love! an excellent write :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks :)