From Ignorance to refinement

Introspection stuff....

I am an ignorant person 

I trust blindness and silence

Yearning to be a prodigious scholar, 

To experience the awareness of the intellectualism

Of the highest order, to return to innocence.

The star of knowledge asks me to go

To the benefaction of the cyclic moon 

where I will learn the secrets of surrender

The self-oblivion of divorced selfdom

I try to encompass the flaring perception.

My spirit surrounds decadence

The identity of the integral, the fugue of time

All have mortal meanings

Taken from the aspect of all perspectives

From those fields that I know,intimately.

I try to learn the cosmic importance

Of tenderness, immeasurable empathy

My solitude only cares for that

In the brutality of life's  disarray, limited metaphors

Grinding oppositions, colossal repetitions.

 

Reviews

[Angeldust-magic]

I like the whole poem but one thing i think u could work on is the word layout and sentence structure, maybe you could of put your words in a different order the poem would have better flow and articulation to it. Also, our minds automatically reject any clashing word phrases, making it harder to understand and less appealing. But great job u have a good vocabulary

[patricia]

I enjoyed this description of the search and the dis-ease beneath which trys to force results. I especially liked the last three lines that summed it all up nicely in the education of consequences.

[Dayran]

In the search for life we sometimes seek that which promises a revival of our hopes and dreams. In the Tamil experience this came to represent itself recently in the experience of
' Arunagirinathar. ' Its a story of rebirth. You might enjoy it ... at :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJI5hgdvsMg

[gombeggar]

still need to cap all words in yer titles

interesting words but seems you are just stringing words together...where's the heart?