The secret of my musings

I live gently for this, tenderly walking

Pregnant with serenity, 

for reward of a full life

I am not just a paseerby as I pretend.

The art of my poetic  forms,

where I dwell into my soul

There is no other pinnacle of innervation

That fills my veins with such blissful ease.

I bid Love ask, with loving faith to quell

More subtle and divine than any joys yet

The sun spent in my laboring heart

the last calming wave of moonlight that keeps me alive.

Some more truth to settle in a mortal heart

That I melt for virtues and efforts

I am the last melody of my kind

fighting for the muses of my verses.

 

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Nice poem!

[patricia]

i read this several times to see where it took me and my first thoughts were this kind of poem can either come across really good or not quite capturing the essence but this is good. I liked the use of your word gently and the idea of purpose for living and the momental fleets of observation portrayed as the bliss of the now. I loved the fighting for the muses of my verses.

[stephen dillon]

superb one of the best yet in my opinion

[Dayran]

The poem certainly walks, like in a tropical forest where the light breaks the canopy in pockets and brings rays of illumination to the person walking. But it also harks to the sounds especially when they are from voices he has not heard before, some soothing others gaunt and wailing. Nice write Bal.

[quinfinn]

i think your poetry will be long read and remembered. this is incredible writing.

[AWickedMoon]

A very beautiful poem.

[gombeggar]

some very good lines here...i especially like te last 2

[G!o]

Beautiful imagery and crafted really well. It flows smoothly.

[Marie]

You give a new dimension to poetry.

[Trigorin]

Very beautiful poem, and the sentiments you express are very resonating and deep. It's very obvious that you've put a great deal of emotion and work into this piece, and I think that resonates very well with the reader. Your use of imagery is very good, and your concept is interesting and well-executed. Very good work.