Together (My 100th piece!!)

My 100th piece on writerscafe :) Something that I wrote a few months ago...had to add some flavors to it.

In the precious years of my youth
I have written what I could write
I had no hope to see the sunrise
but I cherished the fading light.

And you said me to turn back
but I had came too far
I found you in the night reverie
cause you were just a silent star.

You thought of me as weird
thats because I hate goodbyes
I wasn't strong enough to see you go
So I bid farewell with misty eyes.

How ironic...it started with 'together'
and till eternity, we shall be together
Didn't I tell you my beloved
We are just made for each other.

But its time to halt my heart's avidity
I shall wait to subtend

from the places where you originated

and from the places where I end.

Reviews

[Marie]

Congratulations...I'm sure you'll add many more poems...

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Nice poem with a personal touch...
"from the places where you originated
and from the places where I end."
My fav lines...... Well done!
Congrats btw for the 100th poem.... Maybe someday you will add another 0 to it...

[David Scott]

This reads like a mountain top. A good place to stop and enjoy the view before the trees gather back in as you descend on the next stretch of your travels...
Well penned.