Rewriting verses for a damsel

Here I encrave another verse

of love and earthly feelings

Here is a prayer for you 

over chronicles, flowing like reticence.

I write for your hesitant wings,

for infinite gravity in your smile,

for your honeyed vision of delicacy,

a divine image from mortal heaven.

 

I take words from universal script

Of all that can be known of

Of Beauty or of truth, of solitude

The words, pronounced and pure

flowing in the vessels of my soul.

 

I've written poems for you

To describe your mysterious bloom

Metaphors that linger in eternity

In the hearts of living things that crave

I thrive for salvation from my words. 

Reviews

[gombeggar]

cap yer whole title, well the words that need caps, of course

'encrave' does not appear to be a word...mind u, i dig making words up mahself and i applaud u if that's yer intent otherwise u oughta work on that

the whole poem is a fantastic wording otherwise with good expression

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I love it!