Rewriting verses for a damsel

Here I encrave another verse

of love and earthly feelings

Here is a prayer for you 

over chronicles, flowing like reticence.

I write for your hesitant wings,

for infinite gravity in your smile,

for your honeyed vision of delicacy,

a divine image from mortal heaven.

 

I take words from universal script

Of all that can be known of

Of Beauty or of truth, of solitude

The words, pronounced and pure

flowing in the vessels of my soul.

 

I've written poems for you

To describe your mysterious bloom

Metaphors that linger in eternity

In the hearts of living things that crave

I thrive for salvation from my words. 

Reviews

[Manpreet]

well penned beautiful piece!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:)

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. That's all I've got. ;)

[patricia]

Excellent and more like the work of yours I know. Very very beautiful.

[being me]

seems your damsel is an angel too:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I could visualise your writing quite graphically
well penned

[ice skater]

Good work keep writing

[Inda]

Great piece here, really tight structure and the end is fantastic!

[AWickedMoon]

Great poem. :)

[quinfinn]

awesome write, seems you are on a roll

[David Scott]

This pome does not feel like on of those poems where, "I've written poems for you". This feel slike a poem for the self and to ease your mind more than to "tell" something to anouther...
I like this if I look at it that way.