The haven of our musings

Whats yours and whats mine

I am far from those narrow things

I have never seen the walls of our separation.

I who write these unprofitable verses

They are not just mine,rather ours

they are our truths folded into silent music.

You say my words won't fly

Don't water those visionary thoughts

Am I just wasting my words?

Sometimes I smell those weary words

from the abyss of future longings

preaching in the gardens of my heart.

But I tend to share my musings

May be I shall pull them into my private asylum

and put them in bottles of omission.

Where in the parody of my passions

lie all the syntax of my passion

lies the adulation inside the ego of my sunsets.

You may not be able to fathom my rhymes,

my paintings of sonnets and odes

but they have immeasurable expense to me.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

You may not be able to fathom my rhymes,

my paintings of sonnets and odes

but they have immeasurable expense to me.

Beautifull till the very core of it. I loved it!!!

[G!o]

Okay i had to read this twice then again confirm the poet behind, that it's you. It's been a while since i was in WC and reading this comparing to your former writing, you've totally embraced poetry majestically. This is far more than a beautiful writing Balkaran. It's gentle with a soft frosty voice. I love it.

[Kaushik Mitra]

simple, sober and really a speaking write... i loved the whole... specially the ending...

a fab flow of a poet's feeling...

[Tai Ryens]

Gentle, and your diction suggests a passionate relationship so strong that it has gone numb; as much of your poetry is like.

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. Poetry is something that does something for someone. Be it the reader or writer. ^_^ I enjoyed reading this!! :)

[David Scott]

If a lover does not love the poetry from the heart of a poet... They will never know enough of the poet to love them back. Don't waste perls on a swine.
Loved the write. Great lament.

[Angeldust-magic]

I really like your terminology in your writing,an u used them right. Not overdone just well written

[gombeggar]

nice work, well rhymed...perhaps a bit over the top what with not really saying too much

[AWickedMoon]

A very nice flowing poem.

[Dayran]

hi Bal, a haven for two especially one that may be between the King and the Divine is an endeavour to bring to experience in the world all that promises to be the joy of our revelations about ourselves. But should it be only for two?

Despite their best intentions about each other, they are forced to recognize the changes that come to divide them. But look to the King, I think he plans to bring it back to the way it was. In fact he may be doing it right now. An illuminating poem!