Grant me farewell powdery heaven

Sometimes your favorite things........

Grant me farewell powdery heaven

I'd rather skate my dreams on shorn surfaces

Leave me alone, snowy peppermint

I did love you once

but now I yearn for some torridity.

Snow drifts once enfolded my hopes

I waited for winter storms

hungry of some niveous contentment

So I cuddled close in the wintry darkness

To find some glacial warmth.

Now the frigid aura brings me down

making me fragile as a hyperboreal truth

Frail as a gelid lie

I am yearning for some sunlight

grant me kindness of glowy sun.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Nice piece!

[Tai Ryens]

Although the flow of the lines aren't perfect; I like the concept.

[Euro]

Good poem!
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

[Rebecca James age 10]

really good :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i think that you have used some really unusual descriptions......
"powdery heaven" captivated me somewhat
"snowy peppermint" left me baffled and less convicned
sorry to be so pernickerty, this is just how I interpreted
the poem, all the best

[Deron Alexis]

very well done with this one the way people get tired of seasons I'm guessing or maybe a person who's as seasonal as weather you would love it at first but go back to the warmth like humans usually do

[AWickedMoon]

A graceful poem indeed. :)

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely. ^_^ Your words felt like a soft snowfall to me. ;) Excellent write.

[I, Rene]

elegant and so lovely, like the snow it's written about, I think all have cabin fever by now, I enjoyed reading this lovely write.

[Marie]

I don't have snow where I live, but I guess it would be tiresome after a while...