Innocence derives the route to the infinite

Spirituality is a  place for nurturing

where souls are cultured

With the seeds of truth in our hands.

Nature breeds the noblity.

The gloom of savagery

stretches to our pith,a cult of modern age

where the venom of our selfishness

stings our own claret.

But my providence knows that I've been naive

It makes me dignified in his celebrious fragerance

Now it's so hard to detach

My downfalls from his moral grade.

Because darkness stretches behind the certanity,

where powdered stones gives clues of evolution

And fear ties knots and pulls them to constrict.

It leaves us crippled from ethicality.

But in the end such tired words will rest.

The truth will reroute the narrow things we've said.

The pawn strings will lower and untie

And out of the ashes, love will be realized.

Reviews

[I, Rene]

I just love those last three lines, the entire poem is wonderful, but those last lines just make it perfect. excellent writing.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx :)

[David Scott]

You have penned some truth today. I do not think you made one point that I would contend... That's saying something. ha.
The write did not flow with the poetic grace for me, but it help a sense of prophetic embelishment that both turned me off yet called me to at least pay attention. I like a poem that sings off the page when I read it, but this at least was a thought worth pondering.
Thank you for the RR. I enjoyed this.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx for the review

[Inda]

Love as a backdrop to spirituality, the only way it can unite people instead of divide them.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

indeed..thnx Inda

[Enid Blake]

'The truth will reroute the narrow things we've said' - this line has great potential...
Nice poem :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you so much

[Dayran]

I never thought that in the experience of a burning house, I'll see a man estimate to see how much time he still has and then do up the bed instead of allowing the house to burn down messy. Its like what the Indians say, ' don't worry about losing a moustache when your head is on the chopping block.'

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx for the review sir