Innocence derives the route to the infinite

Spirituality is a  place for nurturing

where souls are cultured

With the seeds of truth in our hands.

Nature breeds the noblity.

The gloom of savagery

stretches to our pith,a cult of modern age

where the venom of our selfishness

stings our own claret.

But my providence knows that I've been naive

It makes me dignified in his celebrious fragerance

Now it's so hard to detach

My downfalls from his moral grade.

Because darkness stretches behind the certanity,

where powdered stones gives clues of evolution

And fear ties knots and pulls them to constrict.

It leaves us crippled from ethicality.

But in the end such tired words will rest.

The truth will reroute the narrow things we've said.

The pawn strings will lower and untie

And out of the ashes, love will be realized.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

I loved the change and the hope.
But in the end such tired words will rest.
The truth will reroute the narrow things we've said.
The pawn strings will lower and untie
And out of the ashes, love will be realized.
A well composed end. A nice piece.

[Rebecca James age 10]

awesome :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

this poem reads as if written by an eldery man from a completely different era: ie the dark ages, a highly effective narrative I felt and quite believable, well done!

[InsanityWriter]

This was awesome. :) So full of hope! Excellent excellent piece.

100/100

[Deron Alexis]

very well said your point was made with metaphors flow and rhythm keep it up

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx for the review deron

[gombeggar]

very thoughtful...u have been being vey insightful of yerself, me thinks...well done

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnk u so much

[Geon Quuin]

Good piece. Inspirational.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:) thanx

[AWickedMoon]

I like it. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx

[Felicity's Eve]

I find this magical in a sense...
Incredible, truthful, reviving. That is what this piece of art is... :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx nora :)

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is one of the better metaphysical pieces you have ever written Bal!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you sir...i m glad u read it