The brand of beauty you possess

How the hues of love fell upon me

like the reflection of the blue moon

like the flare of a star blazed sky

in the solitude of valor night.

How your abysmal eyes drives

The divinity in me, an eternal gift

I portrait your lambent eyes

Like the light of the universe.

Your smile , like an untasted privilege

which brands me with a new hope to live

Your pearly face, some marveled heritage

corked in the pastoral shadow of your hairs.

 

I want to hear your alluring voice

I want to fill my soul with your words

Bury myself inside your poise

feel the depth of your truth.

As completely as one can

And find your heart of gold 

and the richness of the soul you possess

the beauty of the little things you do.

 

To have you here in the castles 

that I crafted for you in my youth

And to breeze in your dreams

like an obvious touch of sleep.

To find the Euphoric ecstasy

The kind of endless life and joy

Only you could blend me with, 

the Eden of the refinement of my soul.

Reviews

[I, Rene]

what an exquisiteness, the perfect way to describe a heavenly body, the picture included only enhances your poetry, as compared to illumination of the night, the night would find wanting compared to how you describe it.

[Felicity's Eve]

The words you use here are spectacular and the pace of the poem is great as well.

Very amazing job! I can really feel the passion... :)

[quinfinn]

very nice write, full of glowing imagery and fine wording. has a few tense issues but well done....