The Abstraction of our Paradoxes

I am the lonely and reflecting moon

standing alone in the wilderness of night sky

You, radiant as the sun of the earth

mocking my doomed inevitability.

You in your magnanimous Noon of youth, so firm

With devotion and  holy perseverance

Me with my flamboyant addiction to a transient love

You grand and female, me pitiably masculine.

You so invulnerable inside your complacency

As am so vulnerable under accusations

Your destiny is high-born and privileged

As my fate has been a exposition of mortification.

You are so innocent and graceful

as I am irreversibly subdued

Your beauty extends itself to oblivion

My homeliness has its own little preciseness.

 

So then how can I express my emotions?

With your eyes turning away from me

You are the dream of time and glazed gold

The diamond hue of the blazing universes coherence!

Your understanding of love ,so divine

And my love,filled with hollow ardor

Your greatness of high thoughts and pure deeds

Contrasts strangely with my exercised poverty.

 

Reviews

[Marie]

The moon can only reflect...it has no real substance...and love, at times, is like that...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Nice to hear your wise words mam...thank you so much

[rnuff]

such a lovely read, enjoyed

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx :)

[MOON]

Lovely write , beautiful lines but love this especially, So then how can I express my emotions?

With your eyes turning away from me

You are the dream of time and glazed gold

The diamond hue of the blazing universes coherence

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you moon :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Your words flow together so beautifully...
To me, this poem was like magic. It gave me a mystical feeling that I only get when I escape into my own fantasy haven. Until now, that is. ;)

A wonderful write by an incredible poet :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

You didn't knew...am actually a magician of words :D...just kidding..well thats what I want to be read moreYou didn't knew...am actually a magician of words :D...just kidding..well thats what I want to be
thanx for the review :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Oh, I know. You ARE a magician of words! :D

[Divine Pen]

another lovely write from a talented poet....you put soo much emotions into your writes that one just wants to read them again and again

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you so much..this means a lot

[Inda]

The woman is put in a pedestal here and it is clear that this is because the person is in love. After comparing and contrasting it's funny how even though they are so different he's able to rationalize how they work together. Very nicely done!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you soo much Inda...good to have you here..very generous review

[eglantine]

"You grand and female, me pitiably masculine." made me smile, and not just because I am female.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:) well that line had some matter...didn't it?
thanx for the review