Hope this heart stops beating....

New version of..'I just forgot how'..

You tell me to forget you

to finally move on

cause you think this love thing isn't something pure

its bad and its only wrong. 

I should see your point because

for me,you are always right 

so I decide to bury your memory

my love shall die this night. 

I already have tried burning it,

burying it, throwing it away

tried Ripping it, thrashing it

yet,it keeps growing day by day 

But now I will summon all that I have

Hopefully this love dies

No worrying,no missing from now on

no cloudless rain from my eyes.

I am ready to leave my feelings,

my thoughts of you,behind

I want to be a heartless man

leaving you helplessly confined. 

Throwing away all the feelings,

the pains I will erase

I will wrap my body in my own self

after putting on my brave face. 

I have tried this on most starry nights

but coming morning your presence still lurks 

I've been doing all that I know

but it seems nothing really works.

So as I am going to bed

With all my heart,am praying for you

It would be the last time,

coming morning I will be through.

I know my love is eternal

but even eternity shall die one day

I hope my heart stops beating tonight

and shall take this love away......

Reviews

[patricia]

you show how love cant be put in a box and stored away, or disposed of simply by a decision. An emotive write, especially the moving last two lines. I'm afraid i am a bit more cynical than you my friend, i believe unreciprocated love has a way of running its course...if we allow it to (and there for me is where the decision can be made) nice write. thought provoking. hope if its true you are not suffering too much. Keep your chin up.

[Alexa Tasch]

This piece flows well and really gets the reader's attention. The emotion is so powerful and you can feel it. A truely great poem

[Marie]

Somet ime it seems that only by not beating will a heart stop loving. That isn't true though...

[Felicity's Eve]

This is so full of emotion. It is as if I can feel this person's pain.

Fantastic write! :)

[Kunal Tandon]

Getting better day by day.....

[Tex]

very nice meter and rhyme. i liked this. very good write.

[gombeggar]

needs a run thru fer 'caps' and 'punctuation' and 'spacing' and some grammer

the poem has great content and emoting full of feeling

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

romance and poetry have always been bedfellows and these two never die even though sometimes we wish they would.