Colorless Rainbow

A piece of colorless rainbow

standing among the robbed clouds

Shapeless and  remorseless

over the misty sky.

It has rained  today

It rained  yesterday too

But I don't see colors in the sky

Because the Sun is Spurious.

I’m waiting for a piece of colorless rainbow

To appear from somewhere

To emerge from nothingness

To justify the existence of god.

I am waiting for a love that doesn't exist

Happiness that wasn't meant to be returned

Hope that won't turn to ashes

Dreams that won't turn to nightmares.

I am waiting for some real emotions, 

Real people, too real to disappear

unlike those fragile clouds

and that cold,bitter moon.

I am not being illogical

I am just waiting for the rainbow

And another piece of colorless rainbow.

Author's Note

Always wanted to write something like this....found the perfect emotions today

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

I’m waiting for a piece of colorless rainbow
To appear from somewhere
To emerge from nothingness
To justify the existence of god.--------------------------------------

What shall I say.....?
It's beautiful... your waiting will be over soon.....

[Westminster Abbey]

I can't even tell you how this poem made me react... It made my heart skip a beat, yet it also slowed... Oh, why do I always end up speechless and breathless when I read your work?!?

[G!o]

An amazing writing in search of hope that might not exist...totally beautiful. You brewed it and i must say i love the whole idea of this poem starting with its title. This is really amazing.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thnx gio ! :)

[Transience]

a beautiful write.i can painfully relate to the 4th stanza.something that would linger when the conscious leaps from eyes to hands...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx.... :) ...i feel blessed when my work is read and reviewed

[patricia]

robbed clouds? was interesting.
The third and fourth stanza opens this poem up to what the writer is getting at for me. The fifth stanza showed the heart of the matter. This was different, a venting catharsis. Healthy for the writer a little draining for the reader but honest and as you say...real. Enjoyed.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you very much..m glad you enjoyed it :)

[Manpreet]

A nice stark mature write. I loved it!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[Marie]

I wonder if a colourless rainbow would be all black, all gray, pr all white?

[Balkaran Sidhu]

perhaps white.......translucent

[James William Dyer]

I really liked this, especially the emotions you are detailing, but I did find it hard to acquire a mental image of a "colorless rainbow"...a translucent rainbow maybe, anyhow loved the writing

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx...perhaps u r right..with your perception of colorless rainbow

[Felicity's Eve]

This is beautiful. I'm glad that you found the right time and emotions to do this.

Very lovely. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx nora

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

and you did just fine..great analogy with the lost love and the rainbow drained of colour

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx Dr