I just need Your reflection

Composed this a few months ago...had to edit it a bit..

You have become a part of my life

Its hasn't been long since you have been found

But it doesn't take long to differ

diamond from stones lying on the ground.

I was a bit like a poem,a poem so lost 

In this little time you gave strength to my words

you made me to flow,you made me to rhyme. 

So the dandelions of my heart decide

 to take a bit of your sunlight 

the night is so scary

when you are out of my sight.

You think there's nothing beautiful 

But everything you do is full of everything and 

Its simply beautiful. 

There lies some poetry inside my heart

thats for you,cause you keep me mesmerized

I wait for you all day long,holding my heartbeat

just to be reprised.

You say you are not perfect

Well I don't want perfection

I want us to be the mirror of each others lives

And I just need your reflection.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

musical and enchanting I believe

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

You are such a romantic Balkaran SS, I think you should have been born Bengali!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha....bengali!!!....didn't knew bengalis were that romantic :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

are you kidding me? Their love poetry is legendary!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha.. :) i dun do much of reading...

[Westminster Abbey]

"You think there's nothing beautiful
But everything you do is full of everything and
Its simply beautiful."

Why is it that I always end up speechless when I read your work?

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I really don't know the answer.. :)
Thanx for reviewing abbey

[Manpreet]

Beautiful indeed!

[Marie]

This is lovely. I like the way you structured it with different colours.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx

[Soul Fire]

I loved this! Excellent work! :D

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome!

[quinfinn]

all women will tell you they are not perfect but, God help you if you ever point out a flaw! i love this poem, it is simple yet beautiful in its simplicity. very nicely written!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha....thnx for d review

[patricia]

Great poem, loved the last stanza especially.

[Felicity's Eve]

This is very sweet. ^^

I love the flow of your work. It seems to draw a person in and you use words that make it easy for a reader to imagine what you want them to imagine.

Fantastic! :)

P.s. do you plan to show these to her?

P.p.s. I like the picture uses for this. :D

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx...
..yea!

[Felicity's Eve]

:)