Sonnet 3: How Beautiful is the Damsel I love?

My third sonnet :)

How beautiful is the Damsel I love?

Majestic than the full moon night

thou beauty attained from the wild blue yonder above

whence the god seeketh all his divine light.

Those luscious words that echo from thy lips

Thy smile like a ambrosial  spring day

That my heart and solitudinarian soul sips

All reverted from my very own fay

But thy Internal beauty more adorable,buckled with angelic grace

Embroidered all with leaves of myrtle.

So celestial that I can't stop to praise

thy soul must be attired with sacred kirtle.

As thou would canonize me like a Deity

So I shalt love thee till eternity.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

glad i saw that sheema had singled this piece out...

very much like wordsworth or keats or longfellow...

just some good old fashioned romaticism.

nice poem here.

jacob

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank u sir

[SHEEMA HUQ]

It is quite easy to get carried away with all the romanicism contained in your words, and I did....now there are classics and there are exceptional classics, and this is one of them.... quite amazing i felt....i thoroughly enjoyed reading this, really well done, EXCELLENT

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you so very much....ur words are much appreciated..