My festive choir

A special poem on this auspicious day of Diwali!

Somewhere across the winter world tonight
We hear chimes that fill the air
The festival of lights extends all its charm
enfolding the chroma and the flare.

Across the distance,something we shall share.
These familiar hymns we know so well
And we will see those same stars in the sky
And wish upon that brightest one that fell.

So many candles and spiritual lights on air flicker
They flicker and they float
My thoughts are enlightened
by all those chandeliers of hope.

And I all the while
drench myself in fireworks of my spirit
the young veins with partial divinity
filled with my very own grit.

So tonight I would glimpse the dreams
And all the time that we had to be apart
I will gather all my spirituality
to light a eternal candle in my heart.

Reviews

[Westminster Abbey]

Beautiful.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx

[Manpreet]

Beautiful work very well penned!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like the way you have, provided new insights, and enabled the reader to rejoice with you, marvellous.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx :)

[James William Dyer]

I really liked the Voice you have here.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[James William Dyer]

I remembered this poem. This was great

[quinfinn]

this is indeed a wonderful and superbly painted tapestry of sight, sound and emotion. i think the last two stanzas are the strongest . well written!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx...

[Felicity's Eve]

My I have your autograph? O.O

Just kidding! ^^

This is so very magical and colorful! A true work of art, my friend. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

sure...now u ll have to take my autograph :p :) ....nyway thanx for the review

[Felicity's Eve]

:D
you're welcome!

[Dr. Wood ?]

A quite magical picture is painted here...simply wonderful

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thnx DR.

[Marie]

THis is lovely...a poem honoring Diwali...lighted candles of love and hope...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx