Ode to my heart

After writing a couple of poems in Shakespearean Style...its time to try John Keats'...

Pushed into the love mirage
to embrace the sweet pains
be-fooled with unkept promises
through the spectra of time.

Accustomed to being disrespected
being pushed around
ambushed,artificed
mistreated with indifference profound.

All it has known of is love
and the woe it brings
when in the divine zone,
a false hope again rings.

It no longer has the vision
to look into the wind that withers
ambushed,hoaxed
as the image of the love dithers.

But I bring an ode to my heart
because it never ceased
even though my heartbeat stuttered
in the so called iridescence of love
it was there to keep me alive,never fluttered

And it still beats in my body
Like a soft spot in my chest
and the beats get louder
as star studded hopes light me with their blest.

Author's Note

Pardon my Archaic english...and the rhyming at few places

Reviews

[Manpreet]

And it still beats in my body
Like a soft spot in my chest
and the beats get louder
as star studded hopes light me with their blest

I loved the concluding lines. Nice write!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank u so very much

[Pencrafter]

Your poem has an elegant style, flowery and descriptive. It seems to talk about the gamble we make when embarking on a close relationship, which could result in either pain or happiness. It's a nice poem.

[Aella.lives]

A love for your own heart while others stomp on it... I'm assuming? I LOVED the message, and wish I could incorporate this philosophy. Also, that last stanza was divine.

:)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you vry much :)

[G!o]

You are reading from some of the finest poets i know, somebody like John Keats and that has definitely thrown you in the right direction...i felt your pen here, really doing good work Balkaran...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx man...! :)

[Divine Pen]

Ahh...what a beauty...one can feel the purity of one's heart through his/her poetry.....man you have one heck of a heart..really amazing.keep writing
Thumps Up

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ohh this is so humbling...thank you so very much

[quinfinn]

in the second to last stanza i would have used the word "never" instead of "didn't" other than that i found this piece quite good and very cleverly put together.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya i ll c that...thanx

[Steven Cash]

Its a good write

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[Dr. Wood ?]

it does stutter here and there but it is a fine poem sir...It is a good idea to try different styles..it can only improve a persons work

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx Dr.