If Sky was my friend

A free flowing verse....

If Sky was my friend
I would stretch my arms towards him
and let him soak me in his blue heaven.

His beloved acquaintance
the wind,would pinch my cheeks
and I'd feel my skin reddening.
and her affection would grow
as she would dry out my misty eyes.

The sun wouldn't mind either
he'd give me some love too
blending my body with warmth of infra
lightning my soul with the holy rays.

The clouds would hide me in their peppermint
and they'd try to hide my tears
in the cavern,under the sky's blanket
whilst they could release the thunder,
and let the watery bliss deluge.

And as the sky would have to embrace dark
I would have stars to show the way
and even if the moods of moon 'd keep swinging
her angelic presence should beautify my soul.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Beautiful work. Well penned!!!

[MOON]

Beautiful the. Poetry of nature.

[anxia]

Thats lovely!

[Divine Pen]

really amazing....how u personify the elements

[The Refined Poet]

this is such a refreshing poem... i appreciate how you personified the elements... nicely done.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[G!o]

I am glad to say that i am happy i stumbled upon this poem after reading some really dark and saddening poems today. It is so much full of light and hope and beauty. Odd subject crafted well Balkaran...really good "let the watery bliss deluge"...fine and well written

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx mate..i m glad u njoyed it

[quinfinn]

you seem to have an affinity toward nature, as reflected in many of your poems and a propensity to assign gender to some of nature's elements. this helps to create a poetic whirlwind which is almost impossible not to embrace. i like this writing style. well done!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ya i m a nature lover....thanx

[Marie]

Quite lovely...to be the sky's friend and know all the aspects you have named...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ya it is.... :)

[Enid Blake]

You make it sound like an inviting place to be!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

it is.........thanx

[Dr. Wood ?]

quite beautiful

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx dr