Sonnet 2: Why in her absence doth.....?

My second sonnet....just getting addicted to it..

Why in her absence doth the life appears 

As a void of her,a vacant wilderness?

Even while thy memories rip my fears

yet the abashed mind wouldn't digress.

Thy smile,missed like the flight of fireflies

As the world were empty of thine loveliness,

I miss the heaven that lives inside your eyes. 

as splurging love and sorrow coalesce.

But thy love for me,yet to flow

stilleth espoused in the poetic muse of my poetry 

bleaker heart might shine in earthly glow, 

suspended by rain in thou ecstatic blustery. 

So I am going down in gravity,all my words stuck in a tone 

my orphaned words blurr,as thou and me live alone.

Reviews

[G!o]

You're doing good. I love this. Just now try and get more familiar with the Early Modern English. I adore your wordings in this. Good writing.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx man...