Sonnet 1 : How oft doth I think of thee?

My first Sonnet

How oft doth I think of thee?
For Utopia,like a broken dream rearise
For the eternal love thriving in me
For the heart hath a mad surprise
As I close my eyes in starry night
like a citrus constellation in a galaxy,
thy image holds my hand,to walk me into the light
So wings thou lend me to flee
But thy presence could only be felt
I should hath waited for the day our dreams coincide
With my outstretched hands,my dreams melt
I am left abrogated,hath a reverie ride
Wrapped in my consciousness art thoughts of thee
Bestowed by dust of time,which shall bring thou to me.

Author's Note

My first Sonnet...written in Shakespearean Style
Pardon my Shakespearean English...still rusty

Reviews

[G!o]

Totally beautiful to me...you've just escalated to the next level Balkaran. I love this. I love your choice your words...For Utopia,like a broken dream rearise...thy image holds my hand,to walk me into the light ...this is really something that i now love. Okay i am not superb in Shakespeare(an) English but i find this here lovely. Going to my shelf.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you very much....I'd like to mention here that your piece'Oh love Oh love' was a inspiration for me to read Shakespearean Sonnets and then try one myself

[G!o]

I am totally humbled then...you really did draw a good piece here.

[Steven Cash]

I think it's nice

do'nt read much Shakespere

he was severely overrated

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Well he is sort of a idol for me...i love his sonnets...
Thanx for the review

[Steven Cash]

np @ all

(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to see you responded til now)

[Marie]

There aren't enough true sonnets on this site...I'm very pleased to see this one. You must love the night; you describe it so well.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you so very much... :)