Sonnet 1 : How oft doth I think of thee?

My first Sonnet

How oft doth I think of thee?
For Utopia,like a broken dream rearise
For the eternal love thriving in me
For the heart hath a mad surprise
As I close my eyes in starry night
like a citrus constellation in a galaxy,
thy image holds my hand,to walk me into the light
So wings thou lend me to flee
But thy presence could only be felt
I should hath waited for the day our dreams coincide
With my outstretched hands,my dreams melt
I am left abrogated,hath a reverie ride
Wrapped in my consciousness art thoughts of thee
Bestowed by dust of time,which shall bring thou to me.

Author's Note

My first Sonnet...written in Shakespearean Style
Pardon my Shakespearean English...still rusty

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Hey pretty good,now I feel like reading romeo and juliet,hahaha

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash..]

Bro...you just earned another accomplishment...!

[Manpreet]

Nice write!

[MOON]

Lovely write like a citrus constellation in a galaxy ...great line real Shakespearean sonnet.

[The Refined Poet]

I agree with Sakshi, for a first attempt this is amazing. Such a beautiful poem as well

[Sakshi]

for a first attempt, this is a commendable job..!
I like that you're aiming to be more versatile and working towards it..
I hope to read more, and soon! :)

Keep it up!

[quinfinn]

shakespearian English is a difficult venue in which to express the thought, not everyone can do it and many can't stand to read it. it is known in some scholarly circles as blatant plageurism anyway, some believe that Shakespeare never wrote
any of the works he has been given credit for...i think you did quite well for your first dash out of the gate, it gets easier the more you play with it. this is a solid and tender write, very nice

[Dr. Wood ?]

I'm sure William would pat you on the back

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Oh that 'd be awesome...
Thanx for the review..

[Geraldine]

Awww, so archaic but I enjoyed reading this. I miss reading Shakespearean style of writing. :))

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you

[Divine Pen]

This is an awesome write...the archaic style...nicely done...keep up the gud work...
continue in this fashion...you have a lot of potential...loads of talent

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx