Never ending september..

The summer has come and passed
but nothing can everlast
only the memories are left behind
Good times have ran so fast.

The days have grown older
The sun is getting weaker and colder
The nights are darker and deeper now
The pain causes my heart to smolder.

This is a never ending september
The loneliness that I am suffering every moment
I will always remember

A deep sleep is what I need
cause I need dreams to live
from which my heart could feed
And when I will wake up
after this deed
Hopefully September will be gone by that time...
Into the wounds which make me bleed...

Reviews

[Manpreet]

I liked your expression of changing weather with depth of the pain of a lonely heart! well penned poem!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx manpreet :)

[Soul Fire]

lovely i love september and the autumn season

[MOON]

Poignant lovely write September blues.

[G!o]

A beautiful way to keep a diary is to tell the tales of the heart. Sorry about the scars of your September but this is a lovely poem that i have enjoyed reading.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Indeed...its a good way to keep the bitter memories alive..
Thanx for the review...

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[SHEEMA HUQ]

excellent way to record your emotional state, which you will look back in weeks, months, years, and so on to come and be thankful that the phase has passed, i like the poem, thanks.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I m glad you enjoyed it :)
Thanx for the review