Goodbye my Lover

I fell in love with you,the love so strong
I've been dreaming of you in the day
and all night long
I took no pleasure,nor no rest
I tried to take thy pains on my chest

With sand glued into my eyes
I have come through the winds
Through the summer,that dries..
The winter was chilly,like an enemy
it trembled my heart
but the warmth of my love protected me

Though the broken heart pained
Even when I wore a frown,i loved you
even when it rained
I loved you

But we can't be together anymore
I lie myself that some other time
before I go to the silent lands
Maybe you will be mine
this damn love makes me cry
when you are not there
And now I have to let you fly

I love you
I swear that's true
I cannot live without you

Now my love it's time to say goodbye
I promise you
We will meet someday,before I die
But before I let you go
I just want to say
I love you...

Reviews

[Chrisanne]

Amazing piece! This made my day :)

[Manpreet]

Vow! Awsome work, great word use!

[G!o]

"The winter was chilly,like an enemy..it trembled my heart"...i love this line
I have to agree this sounds more like a song...it's lovely and heart-wrenching.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[MOON]

Poignant write of letting go of love lovingly excecuted.

[TheAdamBryant]

beautiful poem

[Rob Santana]

Hey you're a good writer my frined. Well written.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

oh m so humbled by this....thanx :)

[quinfinn]

love can be so contrary at times, conflicted feelings and crippling desires.
well said here.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[Sakshi]

This could be a great song!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

i was actually inspired frm james blunt's goodbye my lover...u must check..its awesome song

[Sakshi]

i know the song by-heart :D its amazing..

[Steven Cash]

YOu make me wanna write more poetry

This is something you're really gifted in

[Balkaran Sidhu]

oh thank u...m humbled