Prison of Love

Its very unlike my other poems....I have used some new elements in it...'modern poetry'...I call it

One morning
I woke up with a new feeling
and took my pen
wrote a love poem on a page
but I was caught by some men
they caught me redhanded
they took me to the prison
in a dark room where there was no light,no vision
and I was convicted for weeks
one day i vomited the bitter truth
and all my secrets came out
and now am sitting behind bars
imprisoned in the cage of love
Nothing to do here
I just write and write
commiting even more crimes every night
In the morning I put them on walls
and they will see it and make some calls
eventually they just elongate my imprisonment....

Reviews

[Loner]

An amazing prison of love i must say.....
and u are a gifted writer no doubt about that ......

[Marie]

My goodness...this is different...a prisoner of love intent on making his bonds even tighter...

[Michael G.]

You made me see this imprisoned person and their cell. Many of us would serve life sentences for this sin. The flow was good.
All in all a good write.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya you r ryt....nyway thanks for the review