Don't touch Roses

'Don't touch roses'
thats what everybody told me
cause the thorns would prick
But I couldn't resist
got caught in the rose's trick.
I was tempted by the the irresistable fragrance
the charming kindness
the serenity and the elegance.
Wisemen told me never to touch them
but I was compelled
by the beauty of those petals...those pieces of gem.
But the thorns don't hurt too much
its just a sweet pain when they prick
and they leave a everlasting mark of touch.
And Now I can offer a word of advice
for every single being
'Don't touch them,laying vision is suffice'.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Vow lovely thought! Too good to be true! Nice write!

[Aella.lives]

So true. We get tempted by beauty then get thrashed by it. Great read!

[G!o]

Beautiful poem. I love the contrast of love put here. Awesome work.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx

[Aehr]

wow. just one big deep breath and a big wow!

[MOON]

Lovely write take the bitter with the sweet.

[Marie]

You must dare the thorn to know the sweetness of the rose.