I can't bear this loss...

We lose so much in our life
but some losses are hard to bear
I lost my love
And I lost a friend who was my dear
I m not hurt thats what I pretend
But my heart is drowning
every breath is like a punishment
And I made a mistake
that I thought I would never make
But trust me my dear friend
I am not fake,not a flake
But I don't care about love
I can't bear the loss of a mate
Cause a part of me doesn't believe in love
thats my mind's curious state.
So here I set out myself
to cut out the other part
why can't we just stay good friends
Cause your friendship can only mend my heart.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

A cry for compassion, beautifully penned! Nice write!

[G!o]

Creative and sad. It is pretty much unfair how in the game of love you can't bag with you two trophies...It's either you lose or win. Sorry. But this is good....

[Marie]

Staying friends with a once love can be difficult.

[MOON]

Poignant loss of love difficult.