DEATH

Death is certain-Life is uncertain..........

I can see my dead body
lying on the shore
nothing more beautiful,no better feeling
than to lie lifeless on the floor.

With it ends all my duties
with it ends all my hurries
I am free of all the daily life stuffs
free from all my worries.

I smiled when the time allowed
and in tough times I cried
This life was too short
in the end, thats what I realised.

And in the last few breaths
I mourned on my foolishness
My Life was wonderful at all times
Should have lived with happiness.

Now its the time to go to the god
So i am letting wind take my soul
from my heart and my chest
then on this land,my ash will rest.

As i died ... only a few circles in the water
proved that I was ever there.
And even they quickly disappeard.
And now I am gone,forgotten without a trace.

Reviews

[Eloha]

Very existential Bal!

Death indeed gives our lives new meaning, and in contemplating our own death, we are participating in the infinite.

[MOON]

Lovely flow , yes death is certain you describe this well.

[Marie]

A nice poem...I applaude the emotion in it. But I am confused about your first verse. If the dead body is lyng on the shore how can it then lie lifeless on the floor?

[Balkaran Sidhu]

i actually mean that people say dat dere is no better fellin then to lie lyfless on the floor......but as of my body....its lying on the shore..
but gud point anyway

[G!o]

Beautiful writing....with some good rhyming. keep it up...