Together

A piece...which i started writing as a song....ended up writing it in a Poetry Style

I can't live without u
& u can't live without me
lets make our own world
where we will be free

 

 

free to love each other

free to look into each others eyes for countless hours
free to sit under the moon
and free to count the stars 

 

 

So my angel,

Let’s live together and love

Just be with me forever

like a faithful dove

 

 

Away from this world
somewhere in the woods
Lets make our own world. 
So we can live together
and we can die together

 

 

Let people call us one
...two bodies, one soul.
with our love unfurled
we will be two lives but one goal

 

 

 I will love you with all my heart

The love from which I'll never depart
I see the world with your eyes devoid of fear
And with your sacred love the vision is so clear

 

together we can face our fear
while we live in our love's den
together we can make all the sadness disappear 
all the dreams will come true if we will be together my dear

 

I wanna live forever in your circling arms

I wanna start my each day with your fond embrace  

under your magic spell and your lovely charms

I wanna see the morning star on your face

All I want from life is
your love and togetherness
with you by my side
I can fight all the darkness

Let us give ourselves to each other
for the endless love
Till those gates of the
heaven open for us

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.......suggest other possible titles

Reviews

[Kaushik Mitra]

"all the dreams will come true if we will
be together my dear", truely a true truth...;-)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya....
Thanx for the review.....

[Sanity]

very nice lyrical poem, good job on style and imagery

possible title Ideas:
With me, my angel
Together, my angel
Wing of the dove

[MOON]

Good write lyrical .

[G!o]

Beautiful writing and i adore how you threw in a little rhyming here and there. My title suggestion would be Double Infinity. Good writing.

[Marie]

This does have elements of a song in it; I sensed this right away. I believe you could shorten the title and make it simply "Together".