The life speaks

For a life that is omnipresent

I enter as a spark and give a glow
Like a silent song, I come and go

As a stretch between two statics
I move fondly in all the biotics
Flowing in the confined tiny cells
I grow them to nature's marvels

I end here and then begin there
As a pulse here, as a leaf there
I bud and bloom, and I bear fruit
I drop a seed, go old and uproot

Somewhere, I pump power in the wings
Of all those beautiful flying things
I swim in the water using those tiny fins
I pounce on paws and catch my victims

I suck sticky juices which they call honey,
Nectar or blood, all those words sound funny
I beat in the hearts, I suck from the roots
I stand erect, I fall down as my end shoots

But in humans, I find a variation
My happening brings celebration
My resting mourned in congregation
"Why is it such a big deal?" I go gaga,
An unnecessary gala over nature's saga.

Stop, stop, stop it folks, everywhere it's me
Live me with a glee and allow me to fly free.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WOW! WOW! And WOW! This is so imaginatively detailed & vividly described! I am also "ga-ga" over nature, but you've managed to blend so many sensory delights into a tapestry that seems to say: we're all in this together . . . we all have some aspects of these observations, like sweet sticky juices and pouncing on paws to catch our victims. I love the way your message starts out on the molecular level, suggesting that we all start as a cluster of cells & how we turn out can be a variety of miracles! This is superb writing! (((HUGS)))

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for this wonderful review, Margie. It is like an approval on this write to me. Yesterday I added a poem "the Life" which I wrote for a ten word contest. But that was just an aspects of today's life. The life is more than that so this one is here. I have to do justice to that beautiful word.
I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

[Manu]

Kudos to this Outstanding Poem, My dear writer :-) I can't express in words about how much I loved this uplifting write. I loved every stanza equally and what a word crafting ! You have included every species and defined that life is omnipresent very beautifully. Elegant one! wonderful imagery. This is very much poetic in form. This is going to be my favorite.
I agree with Margie, this is really a superb writing :-) :-)

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Manu, for your generous words. The life' aspects are many. I had to remove certain verses as the write was going lengthy. Your words encourage me to do better.keep visiting...

[Michael S]

This is one of the best poems I have ever read on the cafe, Bala :-) I am really amazed at your skills and imaginative thoughts. I have read so many redundant themes on life but this is quite original, creative as well as refreshing. Everything is described here about life from its A to Z. You are really a great writer. Bravo and claps for you.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Michael, for visiting and giving your appreciation which really means a lot. This is my small salute to the ever flowing beautiful life that makes us connected.