The life speaks

For a life that is omnipresent

I enter as a spark and give a glow
Like a silent song, I come and go

As a stretch between two statics
I move fondly in all the biotics
Flowing in the confined tiny cells
I grow them to nature's marvels

I end here and then begin there
As a pulse here, as a leaf there
I bud and bloom, and I bear fruit
I drop a seed, go old and uproot

Somewhere, I pump power in the wings
Of all those beautiful flying things
I swim in the water using those tiny fins
I pounce on paws and catch my victims

I suck sticky juices which they call honey,
Nectar or blood, all those words sound funny
I beat in the hearts, I suck from the roots
I stand erect, I fall down as my end shoots

But in humans, I find a variation
My happening brings celebration
My resting mourned in congregation
"Why is it such a big deal?" I go gaga,
An unnecessary gala over nature's saga.

Stop, stop, stop it folks, everywhere it's me
Live me with a glee and allow me to fly free.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WOW! WOW! And WOW! This is so imaginatively detailed & vividly described! I am also "ga-ga" over nature, but you've managed to blend so many sensory delights into a tapestry that seems to say: we're all in this together . . . we all have some aspects of these observations, like sweet sticky juices and pouncing on paws to catch our victims. I love the way your message starts out on the molecular level, suggesting that we all start as a cluster of cells & how we turn out can be a variety of miracles! This is superb writing! (((HUGS)))

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for this wonderful review, Margie. It is like an approval on this write to me. Yesterday I added a poem "the Life" which I wrote for a ten word contest. But that was just an aspects of today's life. The life is more than that so this one is here. I have to do justice to that beautiful word.
I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

[Norman 223]

A perceptive poem that has a greater depth than first appears, that opened a new aspect for me that I had never considered before.
Life in all its forms, whether protoplasmic, animal or human, all have a common thread, survive and reproduce. The added dimension in humans is the expense of dying, which has become a business in itself. Your last stanza gave an oblique reference to this.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for visiting and appreciating, Sir.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Nice self-reflection, as I see. :)

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for Your visit and appreciation.

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An ode to life in all its differing forms.

An interesting choice of perspective; writing from the point of view of Life itself. A neat idea.

A poem that flows through all the natural forms that life encompasses, the birds, the beasts, nature and man.

A very nice write, Bala. Original and creative with an interesting rhyme scheme.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you, Doodley for your visit and appreciative words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, people sometimes forget, leaving this life is a journey to another...all that sadness...we should celebrate instead...really like the use of near rhyme in this.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Jacob Sir, for your precious visit and words..

[MsJewel]

Your use of imagery and word choice is stellar. I love the soft flow of your words - really very beautiful :) Julie

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you so much for your visit and very kind words :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I suck sticky juices which they call honey,
Nectar or blood, all those words sound funny
I beat in the hearts, I suck from the roots
I stand erect, I fall down as my end shoots"

Wow! I loved the imagery here! Nature as we know it, and you've defined it beautifully! It's funny how it really breathes in us and we're sometimes too ignorant of its presence.
I loved reading this :)

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for your visit and enjoying the write. This just a salute to the great force called life..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! Indeed it is 😊

[Re-Pete]

this is very good. powerful imagery. 'I enter as a spark and give a glow Like a silent song, I come and go'. 'I end here and then begin there'

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Pete, for visiting and appreciating.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are incredible! The imagery here jumps off the page. Your love of nature and of the entire human race is sparkling. We need to see all the wonders of nature that put on a show everyday. We need to appreciate them. Lovely. Lydi**

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you, Lydia for your visit. I am overwhelmed by your appreciative review. The life is so amazing that whatever said about it less.

[Hebe]

You just painted the most beautiful picture of life and it's diversity... outstanding!

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for visiting and appreciating, Hebe.

[Surya]

Haha..!,...hey buddy you did very well...
Every line you shown us a detail, especially in India where everyone has no answer for Omnipresent, and I believe in what you said.....
Your words flow was superb..congo...

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Surya, for visiting, appreciating and sharing your thoughts..