The Journey

The Journey

A Poem by Bala Gorthi
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A prayer of the soul treading on the unknown

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This petty soul,


Treading alone and bare hands on a path unknown
For there is no mystery in journeying on the known
Many seekers left oceans of knowledge to guide
But not to follow any is the adamant soul's decide

But it is between you and me, I have my fears now
Faith is the only guard I have, watch me from above
I know you are in and around me ever ready to hold
But why is this silly freaking soul so shaking my bold?


Let not the thirst and hunger make me fall or fail
Let not spikes of the tiring path put the rail to derail
Don’t test me in my testing times that are to come
Be my guide and reach me safely at my destined home


 

 

 

© 2017 Bala Gorthi


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I absolutely love this, B :-)
Faith on that magical creator is precious belief in itself. As I always say...we come alone in this world and go alone from this world but the journey between these two end points decides how and where our next end points (life and death) will be...I love my quote, B ;-) :-p :-D
This soul conversation between you and your almighty has evoked a sense of real quest within me.
Peace and cheers to you.
Respect. Brilliantly put :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Thank you Manu, for the visit and the appreciation. Thank you for endorsing the faith factor.
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Manu

7 Years Ago

I shared a bit of it on my profile info. I can't share more than this. It is safe somewhere on my bl.. read more



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A well written thoughtful poem, Bala. I look it as a prayer to God for your safe journey. You maintain nicely the rhymes in this poem. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

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Szhzia

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Thank you SZHZIA, for visiting and appreciating. Keep visiting:-)
SZHZIA

7 Years Ago

It was my pleasure and you are welcome. :)
we just have to find the strength to face the unknown with courage...i like the way you wrote this...the inner rhyme, the use of "decide" and "bold" as nouns....nicely done.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob Sir, for your precious visit and kind words. I take your words as approval of their .. read more
We search for our ideal throughout our lives. sometimes we stumble on the path, but with experience we learn to tread carefully.
A well written poem Bala with a great message.
Norman

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sir, for visiting and appreciating this write.
A fine write, Bala.

This reads like conflict between the heart and mind; civil war between the soul and its faith. You play both perspectives really well so I get to see why you feel the way you do about the two, all while arriving at the positive ending: You're gonna go out and carve your own path in spite of your fears and doubts.

Wonderful, Bala. Thank you for sharing, always. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Thank you Asante for visiting and appreciating. There is this 'I' that doesn't heed and bow but weak.. read more

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