The cake

In the wait of thee, my poem is thy cake
Descend the heavens and enjoy the bake
Stuffed with my love see my soul inscribed
Thee take a nip make our bond redeemed


Happy Birth Day Jesus !

Author's Note

Just a shortie, written on Christmas ....

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I always love seeing you here, since your visits are few these days. You are such an enjoyable writer & thinker, I always hope to see you back here writing & posting more of your stuff again. But if not, we’ll understand & simply savor the memory of our interactions (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[θεά]

What a darling little write this is! Honest and endearing, one for the Lord! Nice work.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you visiting and appreciting this piece. Sorry for responding this late.

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well i am sure . Jesus will be happy heard that such nice prayer. well done.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for visiting and appreciating.

[Michael S]

These poem has devotion as well as emotion.
This is a beautiful four liner I have ever read.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Michael for the visit and these very uplifting words.. Apart from my heart, words are the only things that I can offer in devotion..

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a romantic tidbit...the sort of poem one frames and gives as a gift. Sweet! Lydi**

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for such a lovely review, Lydia!

[An owl on the moon]

The joy of the day and of your sweet thoughts mingled with your heart's dear praise make this a perfect wish for the day. Thank you so much for sharing!

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you, Froman for your visit and kind review.. Keep visiting...

[An owl on the moon]

Only more in the new year, dear poet. :)

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Hahaha. A smart idea!

I guess that amidst all the festivities the true meaning of Christmas is sometimes lost. A very nice dedication. I just wonder......what was the flavour of this cake? ;)
Nicely written, and Merry Christmas to you!

[Bala Gorthi]

Ha ha ! It's his favorite flavor.. A secret ... Only three people Mother Mary, he and I, know it.read moreHa ha ! It's his favorite flavor.. A secret ... Only three people Mother Mary, he and I, know it.
Thank you for visiting and relishing it ..
Merry Christmas Doodley!

[Manu]

Belated Merry christmas, Bala :-)
An ode to jesus !
Very sweet way of expressing your love and devotion towards jesus !
I hope jesus cherished your cake.

[Bala Gorthi]

I hope so..
Thank you Gorthi for visiting and for your sweet words! Merry Christmas!