Fly's Freedom
A Book by Bailey1204
This is my first novel... I hope you like it. It is about a young girl, nicknamed Fly, whose parent's die at a young age. Her abusive Aunt Daisy got custody of her and Fly decides to run away.
© 2015 Bailey1204
Author's Note
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Ignore grammar and spelling, I just want reviews on plot and characters. For example: give ideas of what you think could be improved, tell what you like/dislike about character/plot line.
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Author
Bailey1204
About
I am a young writer. I am currently playing with some plot ideas for a book I am witing and hope to someday publish. I have 17 pets: 11 ducks, 2 dogs, 1 cat, and 3 fish. I live with my mom, stepdad, a.. more..
Writing
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