We Welcome Eachother

mostly a rant. Im just so happy i got a poem out. Finally.

What'd you tell me?

I'm not th only human alive

I don't have to strive alone

You hurt when I-

 

Alone

Driving myself into a deaf world

Our screams are conversation

Hey, here I'm a soldier

Among my lyrical blood

 

Brethren, raise your tongues in

Silent reverie, we sleep

To welcome eachother, ignore the others

To put rest to the craving

Of our spirit lover

 

You

 

Know me not you

Want me not too

Crude for you too

Loud for you to

Love in any twisted sense

Taste my blood then hate the rest

Deny we've so much to confess

Our lyrics are the devil's test

Dear no-good angels, we present

The air you dare not enter

Do you fear my unscarred heart?

Our vibrations taste much better

Our screams not that of horror

In wind the forest growls together

Connected by

Whistles in the leaves.

 

This music touches me.

Reviews

[Teardrop]

Very intense poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Brethren, raise your tongues in
Silent reverie, we sleep
To welcome eachother, ignore the others
To put rest to the craving
Of our spirit lover"
I like this poem. Create a lot of thoughts and left me with some good visions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Not only did you get any old poem out, this is tremendous, great rythm and flow...
perfect :D

[The White Wolf]

Freakin' awesome! I can hear this with piano. It is very lyrical. Glad I spotted it. Very nicely done.