Atmosphere

Atmosphere

A Poem by Poe Redd
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short, i had so much fun writing it though!

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i'm over him as the moon

for as long as the earth

now numerous as the stars

are thoughts of you

my interest climbs

vast mountainous skies

drawn to you like the sun

my clouds are few

 

but a storm's coming

a nor'easter bound

to sink my doubts

let's talk about

this storm coming

so take me now

before the atmoshere subsides to sea

when you'll find me

drifting in deep black misery

drown

© 2011 Poe Redd


Author's Note

Poe Redd
too bad you can't see the freakish moon, so creepy, i drew for this one x3

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Oooo over you as the moon
LOVE that line:) Great write dear:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


We'll someday get your moon here. :) Hope to see it yet. :)
Over you as the moon. :) Love the whole thing, it's engaging. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 12, 2011
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Poe Redd
Poe Redd

Ontario, Canada



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