Come At Me With Your Words

Walking away from this bland reality

From everything I have been told

Walking away from hope and comfort

And walking to where it is cold

 

Now come at me with your words, Angel

Come at me with your words

Reassurances or lies, Angel

Take them from the folds

Of your flower-patterned dress, Angel

Drop them on my heart

I fear that since you left me, Angel

My mind's been coming apart

I wish to put it back together

But I just don't know how to start

So come at me, tell me about me

Make my sulking seem absurd

I am sitting where there is no warmth

Now come at me with your words

Author's Note

Oh, so bored. Come back, doll. I miss you.

Reviews

[November Gold]

"my minds been coming apart
i wish to put it back together
but i just dont know how to start
so come at me, tell me about me."

I felt like you pulled that out of my own head and heart, those words were bittersweet to read. Very nicely done :)

[dreaming dame]

:) You are incredibly sweet, so reassurance or lies it is. No, I love the flow of this poem. And AndyJCash is rather perceptive, no? :)
So... where did I leave my needle and thread of words...
Miss you and your wonderful ''ness"

[hopelessromantic]

its really liked the way it flowed

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I really like this..the flow is great but the word choice is interesting and put together in a way that makes the poem more interesting..come at me with your words speaks of intelligent conversation..sparks of intellect! which is much more exciting for a writer!

[TheElfPrincess]

It was such a great poem, very sweet and flowing. Well done.

[Alicia Hirshey]

I really enjoyed reading this.

[DontBlink158]

i really liked it. it had emotion woven in and out of the words, it was great!! i loved, "Ifear that since you left me, Angel
My mind's been coming apart
I wish to put it back together
But i just don't know how to start"

[Thea]

This is a lovely write...Well done... :)))

[Lively]

lovely. Best line according to me:
Come at me with your words
Reassurances or lies, Angel