Want

something a little cheesy in my own way

WANT!

This is INSANITY!

Lost for words and clarity.

One look from you,

I fall into

The heated haze of vanity.

 

WANT!

It's getting stronger!

I don't know how much longer

My heart can take

The selfish way

My daydreams feed my hunger.

 

WANT!

It's really real now!

I wanna tell you how I feel now.

Boy, I'm just afraid of how

You'd take it; if you take it without question,

Don't mistake my 'WANT'

For 'CHILDISH OBSESSION.'

Author's Note

Shut up, Privates. x3 This is not cute! I! Am not cute! ... :3 meow.

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

Push me down the plank if you will, this poem is still cute:) ... back when we were so innocent in our own ways, back before we lost one of our own

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love it!! Captures crush so nicely :)

[DontBlink158]

I really liked it, how you ended it and how each stanza takes the want a step further. Great job!!

[hopelessromantic]

i like it its so sweet

[snopadelic]

Aww that's sweet. Actualyy I love the first two lines. Insanity and clarity. I like the shouting in each verse to start. Really good, eye catching too.

[Yina]

I toally agree with DD:) Totally cute!:):):) Lol so bite me to:) actually..... don't cuz it hurts lol very nicely written though:)

[Coffee Vampier]

Don't mistake my 'WANT'
For 'CHILDISH OBSESSION.'

that part is the best and pulls everything together :)

[theopenbook]

this is cute:) and full of genuine feelings:) love it:)

[Linear]

I just Loved your Want
Not at all cheesy
Excellent poetry :0)