POWER

lolol. kind of an... inside joke turned into a poem that I'm kinda happy with.

Power over she

who feels the need to impress.

Power over she

with the lonely soul.

Power over she

who tries her best

to BE!

Boy, you are her goal!

Power over she

who likes you, man,

needs to be realised to be controlled.

Look deep into her eyes, you'll see.

You'd be surprised at how much power you hold.

Author's Note

My precious Privateer. You may review. :) But please, shut up internally! (I hear your brain! Laughing!!) xD

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

Lol hun, it's like you had a read from the future. tis be how I feel.:P

[snopadelic]

Lol wish I had that power. I always like themes that's are there by early mentioned. Really good

[Coffee Vampier]

very truthful... very many have felt this

[Becky C Strukamp]

I liked it. Very thought provocating. Speaks much truth, some truth that many may not be aware exists.

[Linear]

What can one say to This?

I can see why you liked it

[Helpless]

lots of simple truths in this! really cool!

[Yina]

Ummmm Me totally confused!!! HELP!!! lol Alright girl I'm gettin you!!!:P Lol

[DontBlink158]

I likes it, im kinda dead right now so... It was realllllly good, great job!!

[dreaming dame]

Shucks! I was hoping to write of how I just had NO idea WHAT you were sayin'. Wonderfull work my dear Captain.:) More on the message. :)PoWeR!!! :]lolol