< Heartbreak 3

starring me! as the Breaker

Never-ever wants another

   Needs another day

Once a breaker, twice a breaker

   Ever-breaking heart fever

Love for want, a broken soul

   Yet another confliction

Addition to my ever-life

   Your never-wife

Longs for this intriguing sight:

   Me, standing, facing you

      Grey eyes looking into blue

   No longer will I be confused

      I am amused

   Suddenly you fall. (I shake you all! Forever fall.)

      Laughing, heartfelt, so at ease

         Bringing your heart to its knees

            I kneel... I pull a chain from out of sight

               Hot white

            Still you don't fight

         Eyeing me, unsure. What is to become of you?

      Now your chest is gaping, open, bleeding

   I watch your heart so slowly beating

Beating, slower, slower

   You start flailing,

      Foaming, wailing

   Around your heart, the chain I tie

      Don't worry so. You will not die.

   Now fastened tight around your life,

      I pull the chain

   You scream

                           (The waning moon frowns down on me.)

   Confident fingers sew you up. You gasp for breath.

      "What did you do?" you ask

   I drag you to a metal stake, a few yards away

      Though you struggle, suddenly resisting

   Still, it's me that you'll be missing

      I tie the chain around the stake

         "I'm sentencing you to Heartbreak."

Author's Note

True story:
"What are you doing?"
"Writing a poem."
"I'm sure it's beautifull. Like you."
"Well, I like it."
What's it about?"
"You."
This made him happy. Little did he know... mwa haha

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

It's kinda scary how much I like this poem. It's quite bloody, :) but it ha this, I guess the getting revenge on the one who hurt you sounds appealing. :) I think this is my favorite from all of your poems. :)

[Yina]

Wow I got totally into it! My heart was totally pounding! Love it!!