Oceanflesh

haiku

I feel heavy as the ocean
as if this flesh
is overburdened

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words. You made your point loud and clear. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[dreaming dame]

deep. like you are:) nice one, the oceans big, maybe you'll find a mermaid to aid in your burden

[Anonymous]

Interesting.. I like it.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

This is quite good :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So intense and powerful!!

Top haiku :)