Re-established Remains

no desc. cause im mysterious!

He
She probably said
retracing the lines of..

Something folded.
said:

"Tell her-"
listen to me.
You told me move on.
I don't stand paralyzed.
I don't believe in your ghost anymore.
"Tell her-"
Yeah, you told me.
Life was the distance, the difference.
The foam from our mouths in that sea between us.
Revitalized in..
asking prayers like stargazers.

Sure came through
for me
like a f*****g therapist.

"Don't-"
I've worked hard, to not get worked up,
through the network of oblivion we called home.
through the blind glaring forests we called home.
"I hope your time has been as happy as mine-"
Dared fill me with hope.
You remember this?
Only knew me years or so.
Wait..
The reaction is the same-
"and if it eases pain-"

Rewind.

"and if it eases pain,
I didn't want life to get in the way."
tears through me like an ocean-wide river
the rift playing riffs from Hell's core at the bottom
where it used to hurt.
No,
the flow surceased,
dry riverbed.
No scab just a rut.

"I want you to know,
even so,"
Wisdom granted the lunatic light
in her flight through the shadows.
Wishing on only the dying stars..
"that when it all came to an end,
I always hoped
to see you again."


What killed me was the apostrophe.
As though you were ever real.

Author's Note

just some careless wordplay at a time i felt like revisiting old bad habits so whaaaatever.

Reviews

[r. f. jordan]

There is skilled imagery woven throughout this piece. I love the therapist reflection most of all, the poignant reflection of a speaker seemingly spurned then condescended toward. There is an omniscient tone to the realizations of this speaker, as if the reader is caught in the tangled epiphany that an entanglement can become. Thank you for sharing your talent with this sight.

[Robert Robbie Lord Dudl..]

i say so moronic is ironic there's still values left don't you say so sometimes
yet, all the whole time poetic still

[Graveyardfuck]

Beautiful narraration!

[dreaming dame]

wow, It's a masterpiece:P My absalute bestest line:Wishing on only the dying stars... the whole stanza is my favorite:)
Your wordplay is great!:)

[dreaming dame]

It's a review directed towards the authour and not you, so you can keep those comments to ourself. although I will allow YOU to know, that I was in a hurry, so didn't have time to think twice about spelling. My grammer is rather high and precise:P So bug off

[dreaming dame]

Your right, I did spell it wrong once again. My apologies. I have clearly annoyed you. I do wish I had more time so I could proof-read everything I write. But I don't.
Though I do want to make something clear. I am not nearly prefect, neither are you. I am not a moron. You have no right to explode on a comment like that. This author and I happen to be best friends so the little words that we might exchange do not really concern you. However are open to criticise my poetry, I would very much like to improve on that.